Thank You Jane (kyrielle)
We've known each other many yearsHad lots of laughs and cried some tearsOur separate lives just seem to blendThank you for being my best friendYou've shared my joy and felt my painWhen I went mad you...
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Touching and loving Kyrielle! Such long friendships are rare, and should be cherished, as you do with this lovely poem!~ BruceJupiter: a forum for short poetic forms
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Thanks Bruce, I do cherish this friendship. Jane and I have been friends a very long time. It seems whenever something momentous happens, happy or sad, the other is there.
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true friendships are a rare find, kazoom .. this is a beautiful tribute to an obviously treasured friendship .. wonderfully done! I hope you shared it with her ... and nice to see someone take up the...
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I did share it. She was touched.As for the challenge, this is the first one I have written. I was a bit unnerved earlier in the month. Yankee wrote a fabulous one and I was a bit afraid of being shown...
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So glad to see you trying these forms...yes, they look tough, but they are great once you get into them...this is a really touching piece, and I love the way you've brought the poem full circle with...
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Thanks Soul. I've written two of these kyrielles now and really like them. It is a form I'll definately be using more often. I never would have attempted it if it were not for the monthly challenge...
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